Have you made an enormous effort to write a composition? and, do you want me to correct it?
OK, I´ll do it, but make sure that you have followed the steps regarding the structure, use of connectors and of course you have made a good brainstorming. Sent it by e-mail to the adress you´ll find in "mi perfil" in the blogso and I´ll do it (but not for tomorrow, sorry!!).